78.Drastic Measures

Perhaps Scrimgeour had sensed something, but his vigilance had only heightened, leaving them no room for manoeuvre. That left them with only one last card left to play—Arthur Weasley.

Should be “to maneuver.”

Arthur Weasley was exactly as he remembered him: a thin, balding man with hair as red as any other Weasley, wearing an old bomber jacket and pinstriped pants that would only draw as much attention as any robe in the Muggle world.

I read this as Arthur’s getup is lacking subtlety. Simpler way of stating it would be “that would draw as much attention as any robe would in the Muggle world.”

Words said, he decisively marched away without turning back.

Both he and Arthur move decisively. Nitpicking, but it’s repeated a couple time.

Madam Malfoy institutes martial law on day one. Slippery slope for the kiddos.