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    Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction based on the Harry Potter universe. All recognisable characters, plots, and settings are the exclusive property of Joanne K. Rowling. I do not claim ownership.

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      pym
      Jul 21, '26 at 6:00 am

      Wish this story could get more updates 🙁 looking forward to the next one!

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      Peter
      Jul 22, '26 at 1:05 am

      Perhaps Scrimgeour had sensed something, but his vigilance had only heightened, leaving them no room for manoeuvre. That left them with only one last card left to play—Arthur Weasley.

      Should be “to maneuver.”

      Arthur Weasley was exactly as he remembered him: a thin, balding man with hair as red as any other Weasley, wearing an old bomber jacket and pinstriped pants that would only draw as much attention as any robe in the Muggle world.

      I read this as Arthur’s getup is lacking subtlety. Simpler way of stating it would be “that would draw as much attention as any robe would in the Muggle world.”

      Words said, he decisively marched away without turning back.

      Both he and Arthur move decisively. Nitpicking, but it’s repeated a couple time.

      Madam Malfoy institutes martial law on day one. Slippery slope for the kiddos.

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